Week 3 - Is there anybody out there?

3/20/2011

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Hello!
So we had a "week off" for the PSSA tests, but now we are back! I totally missed class. I'm ready to start writing again and getting these short stories off the ground. I feel like we've been a bit stuck lately, and I'm ready for what's next. 

Here's your question (s?)--> Where are you at in your story? Where do you want to be? What's next for you as a writer? W

I honestly can't believe how much I've seen you grow as writers, in tiny ways but also enormous ways. I'm really proud of you. You've already exceeded my expectations. 

Have fun as writers this week! 

Ms. P
19 Comments
Sam
3/21/2011 12:16:43 am

I am begining the middle of the story,I want to be done with my story. Whats next for me is continuing my story.

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Josiee
3/21/2011 12:17:15 am

I'm sort of lost with my story. I really hate to say it but I lost confidence in my writings. I have so many ideas in my head, but I have no clue how to set it up on paper. I've done so much, and I feel as if I'm still at square one. ):

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Maya
3/21/2011 12:20:59 am

In my story I have a character description of the "problem-maker" in the story I also have the intro.

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lennon
3/21/2011 12:21:28 am

for my story im almost done i've been trying to complete my plot and and i think im almost done....

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sophie
3/21/2011 09:20:08 am

i'm kind of stuck with josieeee, and its really disappointing because i have all these great ideas and i don't know which ones to use and which ones to not use

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Ben
3/21/2011 11:49:23 pm

I have great ideas for my story, but I'm trying to figure out how to get it to match the "Fear" Theme. I think I'll just have a bunch of scary scenes, and a high-action chase at the end.

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lennon
3/21/2011 11:52:11 pm

for my story i want to be near the end of my story because i think at times i go too far when im writing and i dont quite relise it and now that i have i think that i should really think about my plot and how my story will end up ending....

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alex gilgore
3/21/2011 11:55:06 pm

with my story, i had to re-write it due to my journal jumping up and running away, but its comming alone. im taking a new aproach this time, and im using dates, and years, and the mulch (old tree) is telling the story. i like it much better this way, and i hope you will too!

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Sara <3
3/23/2011 11:56:27 pm

Ok im at the point were everything comes to be, like were everybody actully meets like all the character get introduce and ill give you a sneek peack one of my charecters die not ganna tell you who... So yeah

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"Seals"
3/23/2011 11:58:10 pm

In My Story I Have Been Workkinqq On Changinqq A little Bit Of My Character Description....... And I Have Started My Settinqq && Still Thinkkinqq About How My Story Should End. I Really Want Tuu Be IN My Endinqq Of The Story! And I'm Not Exactly Sure Where I Want Tuu be As A Writer.

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Maya
3/24/2011 12:00:10 am

I am also kinda stuck in my story. Looking back on the themes, I don't quite know which one my story goes with. I want it to go with fate, except I'm not even sure what the plot is yet.

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*kiona baby*
3/24/2011 12:01:07 am

with my story I restarted the whole thing and I changed it. I want to be done with my story. whats next... is for me to continue with my story.

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azlynn
3/24/2011 12:07:07 am

i added took away some stuff i am at the middle of my story.......

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Dre
3/24/2011 01:55:39 am

i have added stuff, took stuff away. I am getting alot of places with my story.Thanks to the help of mrs.pfautz i have moved on were i was stuck..you r the best teacher ever.

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Dre
3/24/2011 01:59:52 am

Next i am goin to make my Characters talk more and make the story more 1st person point of view....

"i am being grabed in my story, as a child is grabed by life"- Dre

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Tati
3/24/2011 11:52:00 pm

Im doing good with my story....i think i have everything ready to make it good....all i have to do is put it all of it together... ;P

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Tati <3
3/24/2011 11:56:06 pm

In my story i have people talking and people having flashbacks....i cant wait to finish and see how it turns out... <3

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Elli
3/25/2011 12:04:35 am

I'm at an angsty part where the main character just passed out for no reason. Now she's moaning about how no one loves her and blah blah. I want to get to the part where something important is actually happening, and I'll be there soon, I already know. I just have to type the part where she gets her lazy butt up the stairs and falls asleep on her bed until the next day. What's next for me as a writer? More writing, of course.

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Caleb
3/25/2011 12:10:45 am

I am nearing the end of my story, which I really want to finish because I've put a lot of effort into concluding it. Right now I don't where next to go as a writer.

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